Assessing a Cooperative Writing Process in an Undergraduate Legal Writing Course
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Volume 96
Number 1 Volume 96, Fall 2022, Number 1
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Assessing a Cooperative Writing Process in an Undergraduate
Legal Writing Course
James A. Croft
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ASSESSING A COOPERATIVE WRITING
PROCESS IN AN UNDERGRADUATE LEGAL
WRITING COURSE
JAMES A. CROFT†
INTRODUCTION
I teach legal writing to undergraduate students, and I
primarily do so by cooperatively writing with them, using
instructional time to work through the students’ writing
assignments as a class. I arrived at this process organically over
several years. When I first started teaching, I was surprised by
the disconnect between my expectations regarding student writing
and student performance. To attempt to close that gap, I began
going through parts of the research and writing process
cooperatively with my students in class, and increasing the
amount of work that we did together each semester until, in the
semester assessed in this study, the bulk of our class time was
spent collectively working through the students’ writing
assignments.
This study critically evaluates the efficacy of my practice of
writing with the students by asking two questions. First, is there
evidence that my students, who spent the semester cooperatively
writing with me and their peers, demonstrated an improvement in
their ability to write independently? Second, how can I improve
my teaching process? I attempted to address these questions by
reviewing student texts for demonstrated improvement in the
following areas: (1) the ability to report on cases and statutes
accurately and precisely, includeing the ability to expressly
connect those sources to a problem; and (2) use of citations. Both
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James Croft is an Associate Professor at St. John’s University in New York,
where he serves as the Director of the undergraduate Legal Studies program for the
Queens Campus. Prior to joining the St. John’s University faculty, he worked as a
restructuring and bankruptcy associate at Cleary Gottlieb Steen & Hamilton, LLP.
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of these qualities of writing are valued at the college level,1 at the
law school level, and in legal practice.2 I also surveyed my
1
In pre-professional writing at the college level, students are expected to report
on their sources accurately, to apply those sources to problems effectively and
expressly and to cite their sources properly. See, e.g., COUNCIL OF WRITING PROGRAM
ADMINISTRATORS, WPA OUTCOMES STATEMENT FOR FIRST-YEAR COMPOSITION (2014)
(mentioning the need to teach first-year college students to evaluate sources for
accuracy and the need to teach those students citation conventions); Arthur L. Costa,
Describing the Habits of Mind, in LEARNING AND LEADING WITH HABITS OF MIND: 16
ESSENTIAL CHARACTERISTICS FOR SUCCESS 25, 29 (Arthur L. Costa & Bena Kallick
eds., 2008) (including “striving for accuracy” and “thinking and communicating with
clarity and precision” as habits of mind of effective people); CHRIS THAISS & TERRY
MEYERS ZAWACKI, ENGAGED WRITERS & DYNAMIC DISCIPLINES 4–7 (2006) (calling
persistence, discipline and careful attention qualities of “academic writing”); DAVID
ROSSENWASSER & JILL STEPHEN, WRITING ANALYTICALLY 4–10, 37–39, 110–11 (5th
ed. 2006) (including defining how parts of a problem are related and making implicit
points explicit as “analytical moves” and discussing the need for students to expressly
make connections between their evidence and their claims, the need for students to
cite their sources and the need for students to conform to style guides when writing);
The Citation Project: Reframing the Conversation about Plagiarism, CITATION
PROJECT, http://www.citationproject.net/ [https://perma.cc/88YJ-FBDD] (last visited
Jan. 4, 2020) (studying and documenting student use of citations in college-level
source based writing).
2
Similarly, the literature on law student legal writing and professional legal
writing highlights the need for legal writers to report on their sources effectively and
accurately, to apply those sources to problems effectively and expressly, and to cite
their sources properly. See, e.g., ABA SECTION OF LEGAL EDUCATION AND ADMISSIONS
TO THE BAR, SOURCEBOOK ON LEGAL WRITING PROGRAMS 7, 24–25, 55 (Eric B. Easton
et al. eds., 2d ed. 2006) (discussing accuracy, precision and effective citation
throughout); HUNTER M. BRELAND & FREDERICK M. HART, THE LAW SCHOOL
ADMISSION COUNCIL, DEFINING LEGAL WRITING: AN EMPIRICAL ANALYSIS OF THE
LEGAL MEMORANDUM tbl.21, app.B (1994) (identifying factors including the following,
as elements of a strong legal memorandum: supporting claims with controlling
statutes and cases; accurate descriptions of authorities; the establishment of a linkage
between the problem and legal authority; and correct citation form); Jessica Clark &
Christy DeSanctis, Toward a Unified Grading Vocabulary: Using Rubrics in Legal
Writing Courses, 63 J. LEGAL EDUC. 3, 25–29 (2013) (noting the following as elements
of a strong legal memorandum: supporting claims with adequate research, accurate
use of cases, the express comparison of those cases to the problem at hand and
citations); Susan Hanley Kosse & David T. ButleRitchie, How Judges, Practitioners,
and Legal Writing Teachers Assess the Writing Skills of New Law Graduates: A
Comparative Study, 53 J. LEGAL EDUC. 80, 85–86, 89 (2003) (surveying judges,
practitioners, and legal writing teachers on the legal writing skills of recent law
graduates and reporting that those respondents identified precision, accuracy and the
substantiation of all statements as elements of good writing in legal memoranda and
identified citation errors and sloppy language as common problems in legal writing);
Kristen K. Robbins-Tiscione, The Inside Scoop: What Federal Judges Really Think
about the Way Lawyers Write, 8 LEGAL WRITING: J. LEGAL WRITING INST. 257, 268,
270 (2002) (surveying federal judges on their thoughts about attorney writing and
finding that judges value accurate reporting on the law and effective application of
the law to the facts of the case); Judith D. Fischer, Bareheaded and Barefaced Counsel:
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students about their experience in my course.3
I. MY COURSE
I teach legal writing in the American Bar Associationapproved undergraduate legal studies program at St. John’s
University in New York. The course, Legal Research and Writing
I, is generally the second course that students take in the legal
studies major sequence. Ideally, students take the course after
taking Introduction to Legal Studies, an introductory course on
reading legal texts and legal analysi (...truncated)