The Motifs of Water and Death in Rudyard Kipling's and Joseph Conrad's Short Stories
Criterion: A Journal of Literary Criticism
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The Motifs of Water and Death in Rudyard
Kipling's and Joseph Conrad's Short Stories
Shane Peterson
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The Motifs of Water
and Death in Rudyard
Kipling's and Joseph
Conrad's Short Stories
Shane Peterson
Aside from the similarity of themes on European imperialism,
Rudyard Kipling’s “Without Benefit of Clergy” and Joseph Conrad’s “The Lagoon”
have similar motifs of life and death as shown through the natural surroundings of India and Southeast Asia. In both of these short stories, the descriptions
of water in the monsoon and in the lagoon show how nature almost mourns for
the deaths of the two female characters, Ameera and Diamelen. Kipling views
water as bringing death because it is full of noise, fury, and sickness. Conrad’s
descriptions of the river and the lagoon convey a sense of silence and immobility, reflecting the illusions of love and life that Arsat strives to attain. In either
case, both authors seem to suggest that Nature is the true master of the Eastern provinces—rather than the British colonists, the local natives, or anyone
in between—as shown in its manifestations of water, which give life and instill
death simultaneously.
Conrad and Kipling had a large breadth of understanding of the water features and imperialist cultures in their respective settings of Southeast Asia and
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India. Conrad gained some significant maritime experience from his travels
with French ships that led him across the Atlantic, into Africa, and around the
Far East (Watts). The symbol of water in the ocean or rivers becomes a major
theme in some of his fiction. In Kipling’s case, he worked as a journalist in native
India, particularly in the province of Lahore. He held this position for several
years, which allowed him to “move freely among the different levels of Lahore
society,” including the British military officials and the local Indians (Pinney).
He also witnessed the rainy seasons throughout the year and how they affected
the two different groups. For the British, times of flooding and famine were
nothing but a loss of profits; for the Indians, they could bring either seasons of
plenty and abundance or seasons of starvation and disease. These experiences
of both authors may have helped them understand Nature’s prevalence over
colonial power and influenced the narratives of these short stories as well as
their natural settings and primary characters who stand above the colonized
land and its inhabitants.
As part of the trope of white rulers in exotic foreign lands, both of these
authors narrate their stories through the perspectives of two imperial white
men who witness the beginning of the fall of colonialism. According to Kaori
Nagai, both authors write their narratives from the viewpoints of white men
who rule over the local natives in a way that “provokes awe and respect among
the inhabitants,” so that the natives see each one of them as “a protector, a
champion, and sometimes a god” (90). In “The Lagoon,” Arsat addresses the
white man as “Tuan,” a Malaysian term for a European lord that means “sir”
or “mister” (“Tuan”). Similarly, Ameera often calls Holden her “whole life” and
even her “god” (Kipling 1740). In both cases, these white men live out a real-life
fantasy of a white ruler over the natives, which Pinney describes as “pleasant” at
first because their rule “is not forced but spontaneously accepted: the natives
immediately see in the hero qualities far superior to theirs, and . . . follow his
orders as the Law” (Nagai 90). Despite their respect and command over the
native population, these characters “become the sole witness to the collapse
of the fantasy” when someone they are close to either passes away or suffers a
severe loss in correlation to a natural event like a monsoon or the rising sunrise
over a lagoon (90). In essence, Nature destroys this illusion of power.
Before these natural events occur, Kipling and Conrad display the natural settings of India and Southeast Asia as being more silent with only slight
suggestions of a coming catastrophe. In “Without Benefit of Clergy,” before the
outbreak of cholera that would ultimately kill Ameera, the powers of Nature
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“had allowed…four years of plenty wherein men fed well and the crops were
certain” (Kipling 1737). Despite this abundance of food and life that the supernatural powers of nature provide, Kipling describes it as more of a calm before
a storm through his images of “the blossom of the blood-red dhak tree that had
flowered untimely for a sign of what was coming” (1737). This sign of the dhak
tree as “blood-red” easily signifies a coming death on a national or individual
scale. Its early blossoming also indicates that harder times are approaching,
both for the British colonists and the local Indians, in which the land would
respond after a season of plenty with a season of famine, disease, pestilence,
and flood on a Biblical scale. Holden even overhears the Deputy Commissioner
at the club state that “Nature’s going to audit her accounts with a big red pencil
this summer” (1738). Indeed, a “red and heavy” audit comes when Kipling personifies the land itself as being “very sick and needed a little breathing-space
ere the torrent of cheap life should flood it anew” (1739). At that point, the seasonal rains disturb the peace that puts the protagonist Holden at ease, making
him feel like everything in his life is still within his control.
This is similar but slightly different in Conrad’s “The Lagoon,” in which
the land is predominately more silent and pensive until a white ruler’s coming correlates with an impending death. As Tuan travels upstream, the jungle
stands “motionless and silent” on both banks of the river as if it had “been
bewitched into an immobility perfect and final” (59). This silence is almost
lifeless because the water itself appears frozen and immobile as if Tuan had
entered “a land from which the very memory of motion for ever departed” (59).
This silence and stillness does not break until the coming of the white man’s
canoe, the oars churning up the water “with a confused murmur” and causing
it to gurgle out loud in “the short-lived disturbance of its own making” (59).
Conrad describes the land as silent and motionless to show how the coming
of the white man (...truncated)